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crossetty
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Post Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:28 am Reply with quote
Man:
Always aiming at truth
Always mything.
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AmandaT
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Post Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:10 am Reply with quote
ha ha, I like your lisp. I'd suggest you take out the caps and punctuation except something to indicate the break between fragment and phrase.

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